Confusing?

I thought Logan's Run was a bit confusing. Like, one minute they'de be in one place, then I'd turn the page and theye were somewhere completly different. Everything else was good, but the transitions were really fast and confusing. What do you guys think?

Admin wrote:I thought Logan's Run was a bit confusing. Like, one minute they'de be in one place, then I'd turn the page and theye were somewhere completly different. Everything else was good, but the transitions were really fast and confusing. What do you guys think?

yeah, definitely. not as confusing as fahrenheit, but the authors need to work on transitions!